Posted by: Jivani Lisa | August 22, 2012

Vortex

August 22nd:
Suddenly sucked into a vortex –
the date of hermitage entrance –
blackened pit of dread and despair.
Swimming yet sighing,
oh my weakness, fatigue.
Let me sleep.
Bound by discouragement,
I still want God –
five years later, yes,
I strive and breathe.

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  1. Jeanette Gallagher's avatar

    Great poem, Lisa. Thanks for sharing.

    By: Jeanette Gallagher on August 22, 2012
    at 3:34 pm

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    • Jivani Lisa's avatar

      Glad you like it! Pretty cool when poems just pop into one’s head. šŸ™‚

      By: Lisa on August 22, 2012
      at 4:07 pm

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